In the days following the tragic shootings at Dawson College, Canadian news organizations, along with their readers, have spent a considerable amount of time trying to get a picture of what happened and, more importantly, why. Details have become clear about the shooter, Kimveer Gill, and his mindset. We have learned what the scene inside the school was like during his rampage. And, much to every one’s sadness, we have learned of a young victim — Anastasia De Sousa. Two others still remain in critical condition today.
For many national papers, this situation presents a problem — how to tell the story of a young life extinguished far too early, while also attempting to explain a killer’s motivations? Both stories are at the forefront of many people’s minds and both deserve front page coverage. Flipping through a couple of editions yesterday it became abundantly clear, while some papers pulled it off, many did not.
The Toronto Star
The cover of the Toronto Star (pictured above) was the worst offender. By opting to place the two stories side-by-side, each with a prominent photo of the subject, the page ended up looking more like a boxing match promotion than two meaningful stories worthy of attention.
In my opinion, pictures of victims — particularly victims of such a violent crime — should never be played right next to one of their killer, and certainly without the same prominence. It serves only to cheapen the victim’s story and to remind their family of the confrontation which took place between the two individuals. Even my mother, who has no experience in news page design, gasped when she saw the layout. “If I was the family of that girl, I would be pretty ticked off right now,” she said.
Of course this could have been the Star’s intention, to stir up controversy and confrontational feelings. If so, I don’t think they went about it the right way. Strong feelings can come from many places in a newspaper, cheap layout tricks needn’t be one of them. It was a bad call.
Note (9/17/2006): It would seem at least one Toronto Star reader agrees with me, writing in to say, “…a large picture on Page 1 only seems to validate the gunman’s desire for attention and infamy. The emphasis should be on the victims, not the killer. I hope you show better judgment in the future.”
The Globe and Mail
The Globe, taking a much more sensible approach, chose to run both photos on front, but with De Sousa’s story given much more prominence. Like the Star, they ran both photos next to each other, but the difference in size is what makes this a better page. It’s much less confrontational.
Where they fell down, however, is in their choice of lead story. Certainly the death of a young student is more important than proclaiming ‘Quebec to push PM on guns’? Of course Jean Charest is going to make this a hot issue, he’s a politician. Is there really anyone who didn’t see that coming?
The National Post
The Post decided to run with a huge “sidebar” in the middle of the page, detailing Gill’s weblog entries from the day of the shooting. Topped off with a photo of Gill pointing his rifle directly at the camera, it made for a menacing page. The story surrounding De Sousa’s death was relegated to a thin, one-column spot at the side of the page.
While I would’ve liked to see De Sousa’s story given the more prominent spot, I applaud the Post for not taking the easy way out. They could’ve very easily ran both stories side-by-side, complete with huge photos of both De Sousa and Gill. Instead, they chose one story and just went with it.
A never-ending struggle
These are the sort of decisions page designers and copy editors are making each and every night, holed up in the newsroom. What sort of image are we presenting to the public? Is this the kind of message we want? How do we affect the people involved in the story? How do we accurately tell the story? Sometimes they get it right. Just as many times, they don’t.
But, such is life in the newsroom. You take what you can from the experience, learn as much as possible and, before you know it, you’re back at the copy desk. It’s 11 PM and it’s time to package the day’s news once again.